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Catherine : mildly metaphoric What Must Be Said

What Must Be Said

Posted on Dec 29th, 2007 by Catherine : mildly metaphoric Catherine
what we touch
what touches us
in temperature
of temperament
the entails of nature
the shape, fed on planes and spheres
the shiver of texture
the resistance requisite for roughness
the slide of sweetness in smoothness
the laughter of liquid, winking, blinking
as all tales told in that glint
swift is the story
light leads in us
leads us to draw, define
but the truth of the canvas
relies on wind (or on paint)
or on stitching, were it a sack
for we live in our metaphors
they beg us
to know them
dare us
to show them
exactly where does allusion slip into illusion
and intuition will have to do
when inexpression leaves the impression
that what must be said
is simply
silence

©2007 C.L.B. Callender
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otter : Spiritual Off-Roader
1 day later
otter said

This is astoundingly beautiful.  I don't want to pick out a single line to comment on this time, Catherine, as it would be like dissecting a butterfly.  This is truly one of your best poems. (and there have been many truly gifted ones).

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
1 day later
Catherine said

Thank you Otter!

(your opinion and comments mean so very much to me!)

forrest : singing a song of love
3 days later
forrest said

i agree, a wonderful poem! and i will dare to say i like this line, for it's melody “resistance requisite for roughness”, and this one for it's imagery “the laughter of liquid”…

that makes me laugh…

just a lovely poem, leading to where all poems lead,

silence.

Doug : Back Yard Artist
6 days later
Doug said

Wow, Catherine! I'm glad I saw your light on and stopped by your blog!
Once again you blow me away girl, astounding.

hrtScholar : with one Heart...
22 days later
hrtScholar said

thank you Catherine

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
about 1 month later
Catherine said

Hey forrest, Doug and Tess…. thank you so much for your kindness… I'm so glad you enjoyed!
(this one runs deep in me… so it is all the more pleasing to see it touches others too)

doolang : Unity
about 1 month later
doolang said

ineffably

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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Posted on December 29, 2007
by Catherine

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