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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Kidnapped by a Dream

Kidnapped by a Dream

Posted on Feb 11th, 2007 by Catherine : mildly metaphoric Catherine
It was very quiet
it was very cold
the arena of my dreams
kidnapped me
unexpectedly
a trapdoor opened
into the deepness
of my dream wrestled heart

dreams like blinks
dreams like breaths
dreams with a flavor
strong and distinct

I dreamt I wept in your arms
and you held me through the night
I dreamt I built walls of stone
with grit and sweat and glancing pride
I dreamt of running with horse-worthy strength
and your voice vibrating with beating hooves
I dreamt I could see, hear, taste and smell
but did not know just how to touch

and the worry that peeled open my belly
like a banana not yet ripe
sat crossed legged
and watched from a distance

when the waves stopped crashing
when the branches stopped flailing in the storm
when the heavy breathing reclined into a gentle hiss
morning knocked with a headache and a twice edited manuscript

and it read
I will live here
I will be here
for here is where
I live and be

©2007   C. L. B. Callender
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Tagged with: poem, poetry, love, dream, wonder
Shunyatha : Nothingness
about 20 hours later
Shunyatha said

absolute beauty :)

Tony : CrazyWisdom
about 1 month later
Tony said

I like this a lot Catherine. It’s very direct and present with the raw, and yet contradictively colorful, rich and vivid … tactile painting of your metaphorical, yet seemingly very personal impressions. I get that you’re searching, and very open to other dimensions. I love your honesty, candidness and vulnerability along with the artful way that you can bring your experiences back with you. I can feel and relate. And the finish leaves me wondering. Love it.
:) :) :) :) :) (something like a 5-star rating)

Arin : Gaia Explorer
about 1 year later
Arin said

“and it read
I will live here
I will be here
for here is where
I live and be”

I don't know what to say. You are good example of how creativity and imagination are limitless.

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
about 1 year later
Catherine said

Thank You Arin…
I've been reading through all the comments you have left the past few days, and have been rereading the poems…  and it is a journey of rediscovery for me. I suppose this is true for all art… creativity is a vivid thing… a living thing… and for me my poetry is mostly about the “moment” I am writing it… (meaning, while writing, I don't ever think of it as something that will be read)

So reading this poem, and your comments, and Tony and Shunyatha's about a year later… is in many ways like reading this poem for the first time:-)

(so Thank you again:-)

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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Posted on February 11, 2007
by Catherine

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