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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Too Many Ifs

Too Many Ifs

Posted on Apr 4th, 2007 by Catherine : mildly metaphoric Catherine
too many ifs, they come in a flurry
fall around me, like unwanted snow
on a dreary April morn
it is funny
for of course I know, their existence
should not cause me pain
I will brush them off
to disappear, somewhere else
somewhere, where
my attention is not

there is a sting, (yes I can feel it)
they do hit some places
more tender and exposed
but my body is warm
they melt quickly
my skin will take the time
to woo away any harm

and in the shivering wetness
(that is all that is left)
I can feel the promise
of warmer times
and brighter skies

IS,  is more powerful than
IF,  can ever be

©2007 C. L. B. Callender
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Wanderer : .
9 minutes later
Wanderer said

from the “if”, comes the “is”. But so often, the “is” is not what it was thought to be … perhaps this surpassing quality makes the “is” that much more powerful.

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
19 minutes later
Catherine said

this is true (and this is wise)   :-)

Wanderer : .
33 minutes later
Wanderer said

I am merely repeating the wisdom contained in the poem.

about 1 hour later
Richard said

Time: to emit, to send out, the continuum of existence
Love: the evolve, grow, and develop
Truth: the reality of time and love realized.
The three in a trinity of unity for a harmonius eternity.
If you take more interst in your future today, tomorrow you will have more principle to work with.
To be in control is to be selfish, to be in charge is to be gracious.

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
about 2 hours later
Catherine said

ah yes… there are important subtleties between “being in control” and “being in charge”!!
Yes, that subtly is part of what I was alluding to.

(Thank you for your interesting ideas Richard)

about 3 hours later
John said

and just before the wave and the sand comingle, in that frothy, churning place, if and is meet am and will be.

Mark : Visionary
about 4 hours later
Mark said

Is is present

Creative Soul : Earth Angel
about 6 hours later
Creative Soul said

What if, maybe so's and could've beens tend to take up some time in our minds every now and then.  At the moment I think of a woman and wonder, “What if…” 

This poem reminds me of one of my blogs.

otter : Spiritual Off-Roader
about 6 hours later
otter said

I absolutely love this poem.  The imagery is exquisite.  “If's” are always conditional… . If I didn't say this … . If only I had that …  “Is,” means acceptance.  If we can negotiate the bramble of our “ifs” we get to “is.”  At least in my case, that doesn't happen without getting a few scratches.

Ron : happy feet
about 8 hours later
Ron said

Catherine,  I love the alliteration and idea in the line,
“my skin will take the time
to woo away any harm”.

It has a nice tactile feel.

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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Posted on April 04, 2007
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