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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Cherishing the Enigma

Cherishing the Enigma

Posted on May 26th, 2007 by Catherine : mildly metaphoric Catherine
cherishing the enigma
with my drunken slurring smile
I’ll have a few more peanuts
before I climb up on the bar
make a subtle grab, for 'tention
well subtle just for some
then pontificate 'bout nonsense
while banging on my drum

poetry can tickle goose-bumps
poetry can slice between the ribs
poetry can soothe or simper
run its fingers through your hair

but still I fawn at Enigma
and chortle in the dark

then wonder in the morning
just where
has
my soul
been?

©2007 C. L. B. Callender
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Farland : almost human
2 minutes later
Farland said

Your poetry is so visual. I love how words can conjur. Thank you!

otter : Spiritual Off-Roader
about 7 hours later
otter said

I like the “bite” to this poem.

poetry can tickle goose-bumps
poetry can slice between the ribs
poetry can soothe or simper
run its fingers through your hair

And, poetry, in the hands of a talented poet, can take a “photograph in words” of just about anything, and make it fascinating.  I liked the voice, and the style of this one.

valli : almost still eager
about 11 hours later
valli said

And you were out drinking and dancing on bar tops. a liitle enigma a touch of wickedness adds to that sweet smile in the picture.
If poetry can bring you back everytime your soul can jump, you know your gonna find it.
awww theres an if

Metta : metaphorical longshoreman
about 14 hours later
Metta said

vey nice!

Wanderer : .
about 23 hours later
Wanderer said

embracing the unknown … if that isn't freedom, then I don't know what is.

Kundan : The Golden One
about 1 month later
Kundan said

“poetry can tickle goose-bumps
poetry can slice between the ribs
poetry can soothe or simper
run its fingers through your hair”

I like those lines too!

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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Posted on May 26, 2007
by Catherine

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