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Catherine : mildly metaphoric The Sea that Crests

The Sea that Crests

Posted on May 16th, 2008 by Catherine : mildly metaphoric Catherine
we owe a debt
to the sea that crests
how in liquid calm it soothes
we rest
but there is nothing false in fear
or fury
forceful is the fight
and freedom
yes, freedom
too
is fraught
full fraught
with rasping edges

and the song
the singing
it gives, it gasps
unsettled
unsettled

unsettled is the passion
of mounting waves
in the bite of bitter air
the questions come
they come
they come and stay
and there
how do shutters know
what power
what depth

they wield when open
they wield when closed

the sea that crests
holds us all
holds us all

©2008 C.L.B. Callender
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Tagged with: poem, poet, poetry, sea, ocean, power, openness
Nicole : lovelightsinger
about 5 hours later
Nicole said

thank you catherine, feeling held by the sea very much this week!

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
about 11 hours later
Catherine said

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Nicole!

otter : Spiritual Off-Roader
5 days later
otter said

“but there is nothing false in fear
or fury
forceful is the fight
and freedom
yes, freedom
too
is fraught
full fraught
with rasping edges”

This speaks to me of the struggle between our fear of the unknown and the need to surreneder to swell of Universal Energy.  We part of that Ocean.  We are that Ocean.  And, as artists, we channel it too.  And though, on an intellectual level, we know “All is One,” our ego clings onto that sense of separation.  I think in order to “survive” in this world, we need to compartmentalize the Us and the Me.   When we are sensitive to our place in the Ocean,  we in a “no-man's land” between fear and surrender.  It's good to read your poetry again.

Catherine : mildly metaphoric
5 days later
Catherine said

ah Otter… I always love your comments
cause poetry to me always results from some inner struggle… some inner dialog… and your comments are always the most beautiful continuation of the dialog spirit!
“no-man' land” between fear and surrender… (this is perfect! yes in betwixt)

yaffie : yaffinity
about 1 month later
yaffie said

I like it…its interesting where I find not much poetry interesting..

Doug : Back Yard Artist
2 months later
Doug said

I am sun-bleached driftwood

So quiet now,

Midmorning

And I still feel a bit dizzy

From night swimming

Fog horns across the bay

The blue phosphorescent cuts

Of crabbers laying their secret pots

The storm waves that lay them up;

So quiet now

And I had the most amazing dream

My feet in a gentle creek

Where salmon spawn

And I was the most glorious tree

you could ever imagine

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Catherine : mildly metaphoric Posted on May 16, 2008
by Catherine

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